After the group crit, I rearranged the colours of the balloons according to the feedbacks I received. The first bunch of balloon has a low saturation of colour but I am not fond of the tone which is dull and lifeless. The colour does not introduce a relax and happy atmosphere so I do not like it. The pastel colour at the end is the best colour out of these tests in my opinion. I have received some feedbacks from the class, most of them like the pastel balloons due to the dreamy and colourful properties that would not over-shone the yellow balloon.
As I was not sure about the style of work, I tried out various way to outline the balloon. The top left is my favourite because it is clean and simple whereas the others are not neat and I realised that black outline is horrible...
Experiment 1:( please click the picture to look at the gifs )
This is my favourite outline and the product is clean and comfortable when watching. This would probably be my style eventually.
Experiment 2:
This wobbly outline is not bad but this could cause confusion when applying onto all balloons. Nevertheless, I like the sketchiness and simplicity.
Experiment 3:
OK, this is horrible. Never use bold black outline.
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