During the Crit on the 30th of March, Mike also slightly mentioned about the timing of this particular scene. The running seems taking up too long and could be shortened a little bit. Personally I was struggling to furnish this scene due to the blank background at first. I found the character very dull in front of bank background so I used watercolour and some new cuts to create the current look. It is a bit worrying if it is way too surreal for a documentary like this and if the cut shots too quick. This is a scene full of unsure so I will definitely revisit it. What I will change is probably the duration of the running action also change the presentation of the 'pre-detonating' pose of the bad guy. Instead of showing the reflection of the grenade in Rambo's eye like how I was planned in the storyboard, I want to simplified it into just showing Rambo's hands grabbing the bad guy's hands in order to present a clear action of Rambo preventing him from detonating the bomb. Nevertheless, I like the gradient of colour built up in the close up of the gangster. It slowly generate tension and the level of danger in that situation which I hope audience could feel that from the screen!
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