The problems of the previous storyboard are:
- too much information to show in 20 seconds;
- too complicated
- too much workload at this stage( I have not done primary research and refine a storyboard)
The anamatic suggests that there are too much information within the story which would be difficult for audience to understand straight away.
Therefore I designed another storyboard instead and this time it is shorter, sharper and easier to understand as a 20 seconds animation.
(random cat sketches!please ignore!)
I think this story better than the previous one because:
- it is shorter
- clearer
- appropriate workload
but would it be a bit random at the end?
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