Me and Joe presented our work to the class last week and have talked about the project from initial ideas to modelling the character also the animatic as well. The questions we want to ask are: Do you understand the animatic; and if there are anythings to be improved.
The feedback is constructive and really help us to reconsider about the storyboard and the shots as some suggested that the scenes are not clear enough and too many useless shots. Sarah suggests to show the geography of the fence in order to locate the pigs and show they are struggling to escape.
After the crit, we found Sarah and had a long chat about how we can improve our story. We had come up with a lot of ideas like a different ending; Add in funny scene; have double fences etc which are inspirational and thinking outside the box. I think what we have to do next is to carry on more experiment on the sound effects and music also in maya. Reconsider about the storyboard in order to show the events clearly and smartly.
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